If made a poem about her , exuse me for my spelling faults , mayby sommeone out there can correct these for me , let me hear your response ...

Love at first sight ......

I remember like it was yesterday ...one of these first warm day's in may .
You know .... the first sun rays , blood seems to run faster in your
vains .
And suddenly all beauty appears and reveil the better parts of
themselves .
Here image , and how she looked remains cristal clear in my mind , like it was yesterday .
I was in my early teens , by god at that time I did not
realise exactly what it was about her that made my head spin .
But from that moment on I woke up from boyhood and became aware what it was like to feel like a man .
I was driving my bike as I saw her aprouching from a far distance .
Even far away as she was I imidiatly saw that she was different .
She stood out from the croud , separeted herself from the rest and my heart began to beat faster and faster as she approuched .
Altough she must have been one hundred meters away I could clearly distinct her smooth sensual curves and her sleek body .
Pardon me to say so , but her seemingly endless feminene front made me dizzy .
I could hardly breathe when she was in front of me , her skin glittered in the sunlight .
The smel of her... the sound she made going by , sush pure and devine beauty,I thought I was going to faint .
It only got worse , because as she passed by me I turned my head and looked at her butt.
My god what a behind ...slightly pointing opwards , sexy and firm ,
powerfull and yet so elegant and feminene, She was just perfect .
Forgotten in the procces was my friend he also stopped to get of his
bike to look at her .
I asked him , my god did you see that ?????
He replyed calm ...yes as if he was not touched by her beauty .
But for me It was love at first sight , from that day on I was sure she
was the one .
I dicided I would do everything to make her mine .
Yes I was determined that one day I would have her
Cherrish her and drive her ,
my love ......the Corvette .

 

 

Hey, that was pretty good... what would you write about seeing a hot babe?

As for the grammatical and spelling errors, cut and paste it into WORD, then re-copy and paste, to edit it here. I never thought to do that until now. I use a dictionary when I type my stuff on here, when needed... Another **** thing...

 

That was beautiful man.....

 

Nice job.

 

AWESOME job!!!!

 

There's a tear in my eye!

 

Very cool. What a tribute to the C5.

 

 

you spell about the same as a first grader. are you???

 

Not bad, not bad at all.

 

Screw the grammar, that was very well composed and colorfully descriptive. After all thats what editors and proof readers are for!! I enjoyed it very much and encourage you to keep writing. Spell check is a great tool to eliminate the need for the prerequisite apologies. Thanks for your unique post.

 

That was nice.............

 

Chuck

 

 

 

 

stalker!

 

 

nice